>>Project/Request Title: Copy / Take Survey button for Nightly What's new page >>Project Overview: We are going to be offering a what's new page (Bug 947433) which will be given to nightly users asking for their opinions and experience using the Australis interface. We'd like to have some nice copy (along the lines in the original bug) as well as a button that says something like "Take survey now" to put on the survey prompt page. Also, a screenshot that shows Australis to put at the bottom of the page would be awesome. >>Creative Specs & Deliverables: Copy for What's New Page that explains the survey and what we are asking users. Screenshot of Australis Button that invites users to take a survey gizmo survey. >>Launch Date: 2013-12-20 >>Creative Due Date: 2013-12-13 >>Mozilla Goal: Firefox Deskop >>Points of Contact: ARRAY(0x7f1e9f785ed0)

Hello Creative Team- It looks like RelEng will have their blocking bug done early next week. Web Prod's last push before Xmas will be on Thursday, December 19. How's the progress coming along on the design/creative piece? Thx, Jen

Hi Jen, is there any reason why we wouldn't lean on our standard Sandstone-style button for the CTA? http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/websites/sandstone/buttons/ I followed the trail from Bug 947433 to see the survey and it looks pretty 'stock'. http://www.surveygizmo.com/s3/1470920/Survey-Nightly-29 If we need to skin the page, I also recommend picking up from the suggestions in the style guide.

How's this for the copy? [TOP HEADLINE] Firefox Nightly is up to date. [HEADLINE] Now help us make it better. [COPY] You've probably noticed that Firefox has been looking different lately. Features have changed and moved around. It's all part of our effort to make it easier to use and easier on the eyes. And we need your help. We created a survey to help us understand how you use Firefox so we can shape it to serve you better. We'd really appreciate it if you took a few minutes to fill it out. Thanks! [CTA/LINK/BUTTON] Start the survey

Matej - I like this copy. Lee - We'd like to keep the basic page template, replace the orange background with the Sandstone blue background, and replace the Android button and images with an Australis screenshot. And using a standard Sandstone button sounds good to me. Thanks so much to both of you.

Agree, this all looks great. Thanks for all the help guys!

Screenshot/mock up of the page here for review: https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=947433#c12

(In reply to Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch] from comment #6) > Screenshot/mock up of the page here for review: > https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=947433#c12 Looking good. Here are my thoughts: Should we make the headline bigger? I was thinking of moving the image down and centering the headline in the entire space (though maybe that would throw off the balance). I feel like the up to date message is dominant right now, but really we want the survey to be the main focus. Speaking of the image, what if we zoomed into it more so we just see the edge of the tab and the menu (so the menu takes up most of the space)? Right now it's a bit stark and bare. The only other thing is to remove the periods from the two headlines (my bad for including them in the comment 3). Lee, what do you think about the way the copy is broken up? That was my suggestion, but wanted to get your eye on it as well. Thanks.

I think this is looking good too. To me, the size of the up to date message seems appropriate in this case because "Now help us make it better" is the follow up to the UTD header. I don't mind the way the screenshot is formatted - I like seeing the 'total' vantage of the browser window and I think the empty-space of the open tab actually helps call out the new menu drop-down. Since Australis is more than just change in the prefs/menu, I like seeing more of the overall picture, bc we get to see the new curved tabs, highlighted 'on' tab etc.

(In reply to Lee Tom from comment #8) > I think this is looking good too. > > To me, the size of the up to date message seems appropriate in this case > because "Now help us make it better" is the follow up to the UTD header. I was just taking a cue from how we normally size the two lines respective to one another: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/14.0.1/whatsnew/ Even though the UTD message comes first, it's not the most important piece of communication on the page.

After referring to the 14.0.1 example, I actually think the size of both UTD message AND the feature message are way too big, compete with ea other making it hard to read. The most important piece of communication shouldn't always just be bigger to be effective. In the case of this page, it feels natural to me to go from the UTD into the next section. I think going forward, we could use to scale down our headers in point size - something I'm hoping Project: Chameleon will help with, in 2014

I'm going to close this bug - but we can continue to take feedback over on the implementation bug (Bug 947433). The basic design I have in the PR (as shown in the preview image) is basic, but was the simplest path to get something in place without spending more time experimenting in Photoshop.